Paid Services

Constructive feedback
about your work in progress

We’d like to see what you are working on.

We won’t ask for special formats. Leave the page margins where they are and use whichever fonts you most like. Single-space, double-space, or whatever space… it’s your choice.

Prices for all Second Eyes Editorial services are based on word count. Send up to 2,000 words that document your current-state story. Consider sending any of these:

  • Notes and ideas
  • a Synopsis — formal or informal
  • Query letters
  • an Outline
  • Character descriptions and/or story arcs
  • A 2K-word excerpt at any stage of completion

What we deliver

We will read the excerpt, synopsis, outline, or notes you send us. If that is provided in a Microsoft Word .DOCX format, our comments will be added to the document itself and returned in a new version.

You can send your file to Second Eyes Editorial, knowing that it will be carefully and confidentially read. Every word and every idea of your story will protected as confidential.

Please note the important distinction between feedback and editing! Feedback will tell you the strengths of you novel as well as what you might do to build on those strengths.

Feedback is not grammar-checking or revision. If you are looking for editing as well as feedback, please let us know via the form on the Contact page. Thank you!

Prices for all Second Eyes Editorial services are based on word count.

Up to 1,000 words


1,001 – 1,500 words


1,501 – 2,000 words