A Second Eyes assessment focuses on construction, not demolition.
- What could engage more readers?
- Is the reader given a Point Of View with ample sensory and emotional impact?
- Does the narrative sustain focus and action that keeps pages turning?
- Where are the strongest and weakest plot points?
A second pair of eyes will find ways to strengthen your story!
Woah! Who’s that stepping into the elevator with you? A book agent? An award-winning novelist?
That fantasy may not come true tommorow, but from time to time you will meet people with sincere interest in your work-in-progress! Have a Premise Pitch and Story Pitch ready for sharing without stumbling.
Create both pitches online free. While you’re here, head over to the Word Wrangling blog for more tools and a fun quiz or two.
