A Second Eyes assessment focuses on construction, not demolition.

  • What could engage more readers?
  • Is the reader given a Point Of View with ample sensory and emotional impact?
  • Does the narrative sustain focus and action that keeps pages turning?
  • Where are the strongest and weakest plot points?

A second pair of eyes will find ways to strengthen your story!

Woah! Who’s that stepping into the elevator with you? A book agent? An award-winning novelist?

That fantasy may not come true tommorow, but from time to time you will meet people with sincere interest in your work-in-progress! Have a Premise Pitch and Story Pitch ready for sharing without stumbling.

Create both pitches online free. While you’re here, head over to the Word Wrangling blog for more tools and a fun quiz or two.